doc/cephadm: improve front matter

- I fixed a sentence that was missing a verb.
- I linked to the Ceph-specific Rook instructions.
- I removed the word "GitHub", because after adding the
  Rook instructions it made the sentence false.

Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@gmail.com>
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@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ Here is a list of some of the things that ``cephadm`` can do:
``cephadm`` does not rely on external configuration tools like Ansible, Rook,
or Salt. However, those external configuration tools can be used to automate
operations not performed by cephadm itself. To learn more about these external
configuration tools, visit their GitHub pages:
configuration tools, visit their pages:
* https://github.com/ceph/cephadm-ansible
* https://github.com/ceph/ceph-salt
* https://rook.io/
* https://rook.io/docs/rook/v1.10/Getting-Started/intro/
``cephadm`` manages the full lifecycle of a Ceph cluster. This lifecycle starts
with the bootstrapping process, when ``cephadm`` creates a tiny Ceph cluster on
@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ hosts and provisioning Ceph daemons and services. Management of this lifecycle
can be performed either via the Ceph command-line interface (CLI) or via the
dashboard (GUI).
To use ``cephadm`` get started with Ceph, follow the instructions in
To use ``cephadm`` to get started with Ceph, follow the instructions in
:ref:`cephadm_deploying_new_cluster`.
``cephadm`` was introduced in Ceph release v15.2.0 (Octopus) and does not